Tag: Writing

Science Narrative

In the ground of the earth was an underground lab where no one knew of except 2 people the GREATEST SCIENTIST OF ALL!! named….Blaze and flame they were brothers but didn’t get along very well.I am as smart as Einstein and very hard to get along with well in the other hand flame is more you know weird and playful.We are great scientist but one of us were better but who well that is very obvious question.

Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me but the second they tried to tackle me I dogged them immediately making flames body fall hard on the ground.’’Did you really think that I wouldn’t recognize the sound that your boots make’’ I said unimpressed ‘’You know sometimes you are so MEAN’’ said Flame acting like a child 

 ‘’Then thats to bad’’ I said while walking out of the lab to get some new ingredients.CLICK as the lab door opened I ran down the stairs and into the room where flame was dramatically putting an ice pack on his head ‘’FLAME’’ I said ‘’THERE IS A MONSTER IN THE CITY’’ ‘’I WILL EAT ALL OF YOU’’ the monster said in a deep voice.In a big backpack we threw potions and the monster  melted on the ground and we saved a city.

Underwater Story

task description:Today I wrote a story on my Chromebook.First our teacher told us what we should we do.Then I made my plan for my story and I wanted to give my story a bad ending because all my other stories has a good ending.Then I wrote my story and I wanted to make it sad and I really enjoyed writing this story.

In a clear blue ocean in the deep depths of the ocean there was a person on the ground of the ocean collecting shells on the sand named Rafael with his friend named Nathan.They were close friends because the parents were also friends.You would think that they were forced to be friends but they will just do anything for eachother.

 

As Rafael moved the water made bubbles behind him.As a small shadow crept behind him he started to notice it once it got to close.’’RAFAEL’’ Nathan screamed with horror’’THERE IS A SHARK BEHIND YOU!!’’ before Rafael realised there was a shark behind him he saw Nathen go behind him and said a word but he couldn’t tell what he said.

 

Before he could say anything he fell unconscious the next thing he saw was the hospital and someone saying that he was awake.Once he gained consciousness he felt lots of emotions at the same time but he was wondering the same thing ‘’Where is Nathan?’’ Until he figured it out and his heart skipped a beat.

 

Running out of the hospital bed he almost fell but kept on running at the same time looking in each room checking for Nathen until he met a doctor in  the hallway and asked him where was a patient named Nathan.The doctor was shocked that the weakest patient ran all the way here just to look for his friend.

The doctor was kind and said ‘’Come with me to my car lets drive there’’ While in the car Rafael was wondering what could’ve happened to him.Until they arrived and it turned into dead silence the only thing you could hear was the crows in the sky.When Rafael went out of the car he bursted into tears.Until its been a few hours and Rafael didn’t want to leave because he was at Nathans grave.

Raisin And Lemonade Science Report

task description:Today we did an activity about putting raisins in lemonade.First we disused what to put to the boxes and what questions we will ask.Then we did some of the boxes and what we think will happen if we put raisins in lemonade.Then we did it in real life and it was so cool and interesting to observe.Lastly I wrote what happened and what did I learn.

Castle Narrative

Task description:Today I wrote a story about a story using a narrative that my teacher made. First our teacher showed a picture about a girl in a castle floating with fire behind her. Then our teacher made a narrative about the picture and told us to write a story about the narrative. Then I wrote the story and it took 3 days for me just to finish it but I had lots of fun creating my own story on my Chromebook

In a forest there was a girl walking while shivering with fear. Each step she took she made sure that she wouldn’t pass out but unlucky she did. When she woke up she calmed down a bit because  she thought that she was in her house but she was clearly mistaken. In a far place in a big  castle she was  trapped in the farthest room from the ground. When her eyes opened she was surprised with the smell of rotten eggs and cabbage.’’Where am I ?’’ She said the first time she said it she was calm then the second time she screamed with fear. Unknown about her surroundings she screamed with fear. She was in a room filled with doors. When she tried to open one of the doors to one of the other rooms she fell to the ground to the exact place she were when she woke up. Then the smell became worst and she heard some footsteps from behind one of the doors but couldn’t sense which one. Then a voice said ‘’Well well look who woke up from their sleep I wish you should’ve slept a little longer but i could still pull this trick of’’ The voice sounded like they haven’t drank water for months.’’My family is going to find me’’ the girl said knowing she was wrong.’’Ok so did your family ever found you in the middle of the forest while looking for you in the highest room  in a cursed castle?’’ the person said wickedly ‘’no’’ she said  in a lower tone then she was just using.After a while the person went away but the girl wanted to figure out what the person was doing because it was hard for her to remember because she felt so scared she couldn’t see straight….until it hit her the person was making poisons to kill her she wondered why they would choose her she was the least popular person in her village. After a while she figured it out she bumped into the richest person in the village so she probably hired someone to get me . After she figured it out she was more eager to escape until she saw 5 doves that were elegant and white and helped her escape and back in the forest where she passed out and led her home and she thanked them a lot.

Compound and Complex sentences

Task description:Today we did an activity on our Chromebooks about compound and complex sentences.First our teacher told us what is compound sentences and complex sentences.Then our teacher explained to us what to do and how to do it.Then I wrote my sentences and it was kind of hard trying to think of detailed sentences but it was kind of easy at the same time.

ANZAC day dictation

task description:Today in term 2 we did a dictation about ANZAC day.  First our  teacher told us what to do we had to listen to a video and it shares a lot of facts about ANZAC day. Then we went to google drive and we had to write what the person in the video was saying and once you have written one paragraph you have to make another slide.